That sounds BADASS 
Hes right, that sounds awesome
Youve actually taken the time to make it authentic and "fit" with Treyarchs story
Its also what most of the muppets on youtube think Origins is, half of them are too simple to realize the point of the movie at the end was to insinuate it was all a game two kids were playing...
Hence :
* Samantha says, "next time its your turn Edward" - Referring to the the fact she has been the announcer thus far, and now referring to the BO2 zombies campaign where by Richtofen is in control instead of her (I thought this pretty obvious...)
* Everyone thinks the noise in the background means something... it doesnt, the kids are playing their game during WW2, this is also why the zombie campaign was set during that time, that is the bomb siren in the back ground telling them to evacuate... this is why they allegedly "end" the game, because they would need to go to a bunker... (no hidden meaning there)
* The mysterybox and teddy bears are in zombies, because the exact same objects are in their bedrooms
* Its supposed to be a game they play over and over, hence the repetition story line
* Those muppets seem to think Origins comes after Moon in a alternate timeline (must be oblivious to the date that clearly shows when loading a single player game) or the fact the characters are younger versions of themselves
* They also think its a alternate time line because of the characters personality change (If they had bothered listening to the audio logs so far, It is explained that after Shi No Numa, Richtofen kidnapped the 3 other heroes, and performed super soldier experiments on them, but it lead to a change in their personality causing them to become blatent stereotypes... Tank - Angry and violent American, Nikolai - Drunk uncaring Russian, Takeo - Chinese proverb and honor obsessed... And richtoefens personality changed when he came in contact with the MDU on moon, as stated that it sent him insane - German - Mad scientist)
I know thats a bit off topic, but I thought maybe some of that could be useful towards your story line, plus I got to have a rant about the pure idiocy of gullable people on youtube

(eg.... the shear amount of "confimed BO2 DLC 5" videos lol)