For starters you did the right thing by using the UGX Mod, the map looks pretty basic but maybe you nail the fun factor perfectly it's just hard to tell from pictures. I'd love to help test the map if you release a beta. Keep mappin' bro and don't be afraid to get creative and take chances with unique level design. The map Dale's Dock utilized multiple levels and the ability to open some doors and not others depending on how you wanted to work your strategy and I think it paid of bigtime for him.

Don't take this the wrong way, but it looks like you just started with the sniperbolt tutorial map file and added more rooms and moved the perk machines around. The YouTube channel advertising on the gamemode screen could stand to be rethought - it's pretty distracting and makes the gamemode text hard to read since it's text on top of text. The text you added to the top left of the main menu image will be cut off if your user is playing on a 4:3 resolution - I suggest moving it farther towards the center. To see what I mean, change your resolution in-game to 1024x768.

All in all, your WIP post is very professional and is exactly what we like to see here. I agree with tomikaze that you've made a wise decision to use UGX Mod in your map I think with a bit more originality on the map layout this will turn out to be a very fun map. Good luck, and remember - have fun above all else.

Is this allowed or no? Because if it is not I am sorry and will try to change the map layout, although I am not very skilled. 

There's no rule against it, it's just been done by a lot of people. And since it's been done so many times, it's a very recognizable layout. I can understand wanting to base off of a working map to keep things working, but I would delete all the walls and floors etc from sniperbolt's map and replace it with something of your own

seriously? sniper bolts tutorial? Why not try a couple maps by yourself before you release things. We don't need a bunch of box maps scattered among the downloads.

I am changing the layout in the near future, and it is my first map. Pleaes tell me something to improve on, don't just flat out say it is bad. I am trying

Well it doesn't look like your trying too hard.

Well it doesn't look like your trying too hard. Try pressing I>Backspace and then make some terrain and add some decals + Models and actually work on a map layout with different areas with different features in them that make it interesting to the player.

Jeez bro, how about some tact? A little can go a long way He's being open to feedback and worst case scinerio the powers that be don't have to approve his map if it ends up being awful.

DUDE THIS SHIT LOOKS INSAAAANE HOLEY FUCK NUGGETS DAMN DUDE I CANT FUCKING WAIT FOR THIS EPIC MAP DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODE SEXY JUST FUCKING SEXY

Maybe some detailing wouldnt hurt