"this is my map"
show's 2 walls
Hah, that's the same I thought.
Anyway, I will tell you what I think of this map now, so this is partly my opinion, and excuse me if you were already planning to put some of the things I suggested into the map, since you're still working on it.
Well, at first, it isn't really that detailed, but the structure and how it's made is fine for a first map. However, there a few bugs in the map, sometimes the zombies just stand randomly at their place doing nothing, and don't even walk. Other times the zombies just randomly died. Also there was that message in the top left corner when I started the map up, but that happened too in the youtube video. Now, in my opinion there should be debris (and maybe rebuildable windows, because it's much more pratical for a map like this) cause you could just straight up kill a bit of zombies till' 2000 points and then buy a ppsh of the wall and then you're good to go. When you put debris at some places you can't just do that, although I don't even know why you would put a ppsh on the wall at all. There was only one debris which was the pack-a-punch and you could see through it, which isn't really what you want, in my opinion again, cause I think it would be better for people to not see that the PaP is behind that so they will search for it. Then at last, some of the perk machines were kind of dark and dimmed out, which looked odd. I hope this has helped you.
Dark perk machine:
Zombie standing still: