when tomikaze is involved, nobody leaves unscathed, the sarcasm is too much to handle for everyone
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#TOMIKAZEISABIGBULLY
on topic: its as good as expected as a first map, which basically means it wasn't that good. the layout doesn't make sense, the areas look bland and the map overall seems boring. Try to mix things up a little, atleast put something custom to spice it up a bit, it's obvious you didn't put that much effort into this. also, while harsh at times, feedback is feedback. if you just go "oh dont be so mean, im not a pro so dont expect me to be" and not listen to what everyone has to report, then the only one that isn't benifitting at all is you. Listen to feedback and try to implement it next time.