Such a well layed out and well thought out map . Loved the way you had to teleport to get a chins lake to open up too the staffs. Amazed this is your first map cant wait too see more from you 

looks ok i'll have a crack at it

i thought it was a fun map . only thing id personally change would be the price of the ending , maybe make it higher

pretty decent map  liked the free raygun for filling all the boxes. liked the ending too thought i had to carry on.

one thing i did notice was when the box moved to the ak47 room it seemed to be backwards